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Once upon a cursed time,
A young girl took her life,
Slit her wrists and bled to death,
To leave a world of strife,
She left behing a gaping hole,
One that can never be filled,
So while her family mourn and grieve,
The world for them is stilled.
We remember the light in her heart,
The smile held in her eyes,
We sit and curse the wretched souls,
That made her want to die.
Although the earthly body is gone,
Her love and light remains,
And I for one, cannot wait,
Until we meet again.
A long time coming it will be,
But one thing I do know,
An imprint in your heart remains,
When you love someone so.
So hold her memory and valour high,
Preserve her honour still,
For I know that when brave women die,
Their honour never will.
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The way I deal with grief. Comments not needed.

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:iconnoxcaladoxia:
The way you wrote that and got the feelings down REALLY brings out a "Professional" feel. Good Work

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:iconblood-and-blackroses:
Thankyou, I appreciate this comment alot. Esecially considering it's so close to my heart right now. Thankyou.
:iconpastscarsfromlove501:
that was beautiful. as i said before i'm sorry for your lost. :hug: feel better. write a milloin poems if you have to and i'll read them all. :hug:

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~*~ when a some one loses there spouse they are a widow or widower,
when a kid loses there parents they are an orphan,
but what is a parent that loses a child ~*~
:iconblood-and-blackroses:
Thankyou sweetie :hug: Thanks for your support. :hug:
:iconpastscarsfromlove501:
np. :D

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~*~ when a some one loses there spouse they are a widow or widower,
when a kid loses there parents they are an orphan,
but what is a parent that loses a child ~*~
:iconundeadkitten:
i know you said we didn't have to comment but i have to comment on the depth and expression of this poem it is just such a masterpiece and an instant fave. if you are hurting as it seems, i am sympathetic with your pain. In awe of your talent.

Undead Kitten.

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:iconblood-and-blackroses:
Thankyou, this is the first time I've spoken about this in writing. I knew it had to be right, and I wrote this with tears running down my face.

Thankyou so much :hug: :hug:

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